Rattlesnake

Rattlesnake

Why am I the victim of my love?
I had envisioned you a beautiful white dove.
Crimson blood drenched in your feathers of snow
While you fed off my pain. Why, I did not know.
Moons ago you looked my eyes and said
“An army of emotions to me you have led”.
What did you mean then? Were they lies from the start?
You threw me off-guard; I had not seen this poison dart.
But alas, I took it in, trying to forget the past.
I thought you were the one; our love would forever last.
But to the darkness of your pit I fell, the past is now a fake;
You are my reality now, my predator; my rattlesnake.
I am the white dove, bathed in the poison blood of fate
As I loved you in your fangs. I, whom you so desperately hate.
  • http://michcafe.blogspot.com Mich

    This just gets better and better… Woww! Will read again and again! :-))

  • Anonymous

    Thank you Mich :)

  • https://twitter.com/BloggerSeif Ali Seif

    beautiful! I can’t stop reading bro!

  • http://thisisbeirut.wordpress.com/ Dani

    Tragically beautiful.

  • Anonymous

    Thank you.. I am glad you liked it :)

  • Anonymous

    Thank you :)

  • http://jansait.wordpress.com/ Jano

    “An army of emotions to me you have led” i like it all and this one more :)

  • Anonymous

    Honestly I am quite proud of that line :)

    Sent from my iPad

  • http://profile.yahoo.com/A34SCZ5F5DG5LU7DVGNYO4A7RU/ Hamza

    “But to the darkness of your pit I fell, the past is now a fake;
    You are my reality now, my predator; my rattlesnake”

    simply outstanding. :D

  • https://twitter.com/moon_svetlana Svetlana MoonLight

    very beutiful and touching…;.